Monday, April 20, 2020

How is the implementations of quarantine in Indonesia ? - EXPLANATION TEXT


     Governments use quarantines to stop the spread of contagious diseases. Quarantines are for people or groups who don’t have symptoms but were exposed to the sickness. A quarantine keeps them away from others so they don’t knowingly infect anyone.

    The health ministry is processing more requests from regional administrations to impose large-scale social restrictions (PSBB) after Indonesia recorded the highest single-day increase of COVID-19 cases with 399 new cases. Jakarta was the first region to impose strict social restrictions under the PSBB status. In Jakarta, PSBB is scheduled to last for 14 days, although it may be extended after the current final day of 24th April 2020. During this PSBB period, eight essential sectors will continue to operate, while schools, universities, and the majority of offices will carry on with their routines online. Supermarkets and pharmacies will remain open,including those located in shopping malls.

     In addition to that, it is now compulsory to wear a mask in public places, so be sure to wash your reusable ones regularly.
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9 comments:

  1. Fatimah HanaMay 19, 2020 at 9:07 PM

    Good 😊

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  2. Catatansinta.blogspot.comMay 19, 2020 at 9:55 PM

    Review text by Sinta Khoiriyah (0919013641) :
    1. Content
    The text is about quarantine, but in second paragraph you explained a lot of PSBB. It was not match with the first paragraph, so it will be correct if you explain how activities that support quarantine at home. How we can still productive in home. And for clossing, you can give strong statement to reinforce that quarantine must be done properly.
    2. Linguistic feature
    As we know, explanation text is use action verbs and passive voice. So, please multiply again because your text is still rare.

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  3. Margareth XyzquodMay 20, 2020 at 1:16 AM

    Good, but it would be great if you add some brief explanation or add after the quarantine (that government use to stop the increase of the infected) about PSBB on the last sentence of the first paragraph. So that it would be related to the second paragraph.
    :)

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  4. Putri ArumjaniMay 20, 2020 at 1:25 AM

    Thank you all, I'll do better next time ❤

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  5. Writing for Professional ContextMay 20, 2020 at 2:08 AM

    Don't lose hope! I think your writing is good :)

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  6. bima aditya prasetyawanMay 20, 2020 at 3:34 AM

    I think in this artcile you must write a lot about quarantine because the title of article is quarantine.

    Overall is good enough, good job putri

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  7. Aqila Nisfa MaulidaMay 20, 2020 at 4:52 AM

    Very good and keep spirit

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  8. Yahya BasalamahMay 20, 2020 at 7:43 AM

    Great

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  9. JihaanAqiilaMay 20, 2020 at 8:31 AM

    Good job putri

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How is the implementations of quarantine in Indonesia ? - EXPLANATION TEXT

     Governments use quarantines to stop the spread of contagious diseases. Quarantines are for people or groups who don’t have symptoms bu...